Yup, you're good! The only thing I had was the comment I added about Dor and the nibnails (which is totally OK for another piece, and your reasons are actually things I never considered! That's something to keep in mind when I write in the future!).
And to be honest, those were nitpicks, anyway--it's terrific as is.
Also, I don't think there's really a set process for betaing? I usually just incorporate whatever edits are there and consider it fit for human consumption, on my end, either via chat or through email.
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Date: 2012-09-20 12:09 am (UTC)And to be honest, those were nitpicks, anyway--it's terrific as is.
Also, I don't think there's really a set process for betaing? I usually just incorporate whatever edits are there and consider it fit for human consumption, on my end, either via chat or through email.