I usually try to do some quick posting/replying during my lunch breaks, since we have a rule of "not using the Internet at work except for the necessary sites and translation dictionaries."
Yeah, I've just about finished! I have to admit I can't really find anything wrong; I'm still in awe of your metaphor and imagery. The only thing I can think of right now is possibly an age range for Dor? Unless she's to be very young and very precocious, which was the idea I had when I read her on LJ...
Oh, yeah, I noticed. I shot you an email when I saw the doc (which, again, was right after I asked). Basically, I'm a bit oversensitive and only want to open the floor to certain people. (There was a bit of an...event on RaTs that I'd rather not have happen again, even if it did get smoothed out privately).
OK, so "Ch" as in "chat," got it. As for the question, if you don't mind tossing that in the posting thread, please? Just so I can keep things in one place. I'll be banging out an outline later this week!
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Date: 2012-09-19 01:50 am (UTC)Yeah, I've just about finished! I have to admit I can't really find anything wrong; I'm still in awe of your metaphor and imagery. The only thing I can think of right now is possibly an age range for Dor? Unless she's to be very young and very precocious, which was the idea I had when I read her on LJ...
Oh, yeah, I noticed. I shot you an email when I saw the doc (which, again, was right after I asked). Basically, I'm a bit oversensitive and only want to open the floor to certain people. (There was a bit of an...event on RaTs that I'd rather not have happen again, even if it did get smoothed out privately).
OK, so "Ch" as in "chat," got it. As for the question, if you don't mind tossing that in the posting thread, please? Just so I can keep things in one place. I'll be banging out an outline later this week!